Too late

So many foot soldiers

Reach an empty field to find

There's not a soul to save

Reviews

[Jess]

DO SOMETHING BEFORE ITS TOO LATE ...yes your definitely true,,time is valuable because every seconds count.regretting is not an option,i like this poem though very short the message is still there.

[b.platte]

Thank you!

[Kenaz]

Brilliantly full of sorrows.

[b.platte]

thank you

[sierrasparks91]

very short and simple but a great point of view great :)

[b.platte]

thanks :)

[sierrasparks91]

welcome :)

[Stephanie]

I love this. It means a whole lot, and I love how short and simple you made it. Words are powerful, and if you choose the right ones, they can have many different meanings...

[b.platte]

Thank you!

[writingcrazy55555]

What a nice poem! Short, but meaningful. You said so much...with so little. Excellent work! A brilliant piece! :)

[b.platte]

thanks! :)

[writingcrazy55555]

You're welcome :)

[Broken Soul]

The traditional Haiku has three lines. The first line has 5syllables, second has 7syllables, and the third has fivesyllables. Typical haikus portray an emotion or feeling.

[b.platte]

Ha. Thank you. I honestly just thought it was like a sentence or two split into three lines. Last time I had to study anything on poetry was my junior year in highschool, I think.