Oh, Bite Me

A Poem by Shayna

Again, I really used to love this, back in the day when I wrote it (somewhere near 2005-06), but now...no.

I can't fly with my broken wing
A tainted heart can never sing
A shredded soul, no love can make
What else could you possibly take?

© 2009 Shayna

Author's Note

It's old, so I know there is a lot to be fixed. Be brutal!

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Marlena

I can really feel the anger and betrayal in this. I liked how short it was, made it flow better. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

Nicole

I love it! It was interesting, that's what I liked about it!

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on May 17, 2009

Author

Shayna

Cedar Grove, WI

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Ever since I was a kid, I loved two things: reading and writing. I read as much as I could and wrote stories that generally weren't good. As I got older, though, I got better and soon learned to write.. more..