Stolen

Sad poem. I feel so abandoned atm. Had a 'friend' who made me feel so disposable and unimportant and it's breaking me

You taught me how it was
To give you a part of me

You taught me how it'd feel
To be able to share with somebody

You've asked for some of my trust
Though reluctant, I gave it

For a while it was good
And I never saw it ending

You've made me your fool
How could I have not noticed?

You were tiring away
I guess you've found somebody

You left me on my own
Taking a piece of me with you

I wasn't ready to let you go
But I guess I love you more than you do

Author's Note

I would appreciate any kind of comment :)

Reviews

[apocalypse]

The intended emotion passes on. Good simple write .

[Kejo]

Wonderful expression of the feelings that come with the loss and betrayal of a friend. Beautiful piece.