The ants have my fruit again

I couldnt figure out why i liked this picture so much untill i decided to write about it

I was in my playpin

chillaxin'

happy ready to dig in

i said my grace and amen

and forgot to keep watch when

i left it sitting all out then

like little henchmen

all ten

came and went like mailmen

THE ANTS STOLE MY FRUIT AGAIN!

 

The moral of the story is if you know you have ants in your life, be careful, they will try to steal your fruit and anything else you might have thats sweet.

Reviews

[Hales]

haha cute to the extreme! =)

[BlessedLove]

Gud moral! cute piece!

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

This was hip hop meets Dr. Seuss! I wish it were longer, but I understand you were making a short point. Good flow, great concept. Had me thinking of old Tom & Jerry cartoons.

[Jason]

cute

[Nish Nish the Fish]

how adorable! =)

it seems like a modern style poem about a life lesson! very creative!
thanks for the request!

[QuietPoet]

This was interesting and I enjoyed it. Thanks for the request. Seems you are very creative. =)