Healing

this poem shows how beautiful and how hurtful healing can be, somedays your fine, and somedays it hurts like its fresh.

Healing is a gentle peel,

A journey where we learn to feel.

Don't let the thoughts sway your mind,

For in the heart, true strength you'll find.

Like a pin, sharp yet petite,

Hold strong; surrender is defeat.

Though my face may wear a guise,

Inside, the truth begins to rise.  

Reviews

[Inkspire]

Simple short and powerful
Has a good lyrical tone and has a good rhyme and flow.
The message is to the point.