Outside My Window

Two more haiku, celebrating morning outside my window

Morning solitude

Curtain billows in the breeze

Outside my window

 

How nice to wake up

To you by me and daylight

Outside my window

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

This is a wonderful little write

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you Lessa for reading.

[Soren]

A light and airy feeling. Very spring or summer morning like. It brings vivid images.

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you Soren for reading. Glad you liked it.

[LJW]

Short and sweet...........

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you for your short and sweet review :)

[no tell writer]

I really enjoyed this, so nicely written

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you Katzie, I was worried that it sounded like my boyfriend was outside my window too :)

[Gee]

I personally struggle with haiku so it is nice to read them done well by others, as these are :)

[Shelley Warner]

Oh thank you. It is such a pleasure to greet the morning through my open window. It's a challenge to choose the right words with the required number of syllables; but I enjoy it.

[Gee]

And you do it very well

[Shelley Warner]

Oh thank you, I just read some more of your good poetry. I clicked on a title, Do Dogs Go to Heaven. But a note came up that it was unpublished.

[Gee]

It is now back in the viewers eye:)

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Beautiful haiku Shelley both such lovely picturesque images of the early morning. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us.

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you for reading it and sharing your thoughts.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I really enjoyed reading this. I never tried Haiku. You write it well. This is a simple thought in words that have powerful emotion and imagery. Wonderfully penned. tyfs

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you, your kind review does my heart good.

[barleygirl]

These simple moments, as honored by your haiku, are the stuff that life is made of. The more we can focus on & appreciate on this level of awareness, the less we would have to complain about in general. Here's hoping you have a bright Halloween weekend (((HUGS)))

[Shelley Warner]

Thank you barleygirl. You have a bright Halloween weekend too. My grandkids are looking forward to some fun activities.