Minute by Minute

Second by second

Minute by Minute

Hour by hour

 

Day by Day,

all I have to say

held deep inside,

don't know how much longer

i'll be down for this ride

I try, I try, oh yes I do try

to gather all my strength

from the inside

so I don't break inside,

I try 2 be good

no matter how much

I wanna be bad

 

Minute by minute

 

 

Reviews

[Reeti]

As simple as your poem it might be, it is yet strong in its words. It is a lovely, lyrical monologue in which the narrator is battling with himself. The pain experienced by the narrator comes with despair, while fighting them is the only thing to keep afloat in the warring seas of the mind. It evokes pity pungently. It also feels very genuine.

[Danielle]

Thank You so very much for your review.

[spiritwind]

A tremendous PRESSURE driving these words and lines--- exciting, frightening, compelling. Written just right

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Lovely Shia.

[Dr. Wood ?]

Tick tick tick....life is a battle aint it?.......