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Would like to improve...any advice about how I do that is much appreciated

For how long has it been since the beginning of the end?

I thought you were a friend

Will the sting of this betrayal ever end?

Apparently this heart of mine does not speak to you

You are just like the rest

A fool to the best

This time I will not cry

This time I will not scream

This time I will not ask why

More than a thousand tears I have cried

Tell me Is that how many lies you've lied?

Love is magic

Truth is tragic

Learn well to live in Hell

Reviews

[Moon]

So much emotion in this ! The truth really is tragic and some people are just not worth crying over . Well done Shia !

[luviva]

WOW,
hw to improve.. all i suggest is just let your mind guide your pen
and pour out all your heart to that paper because it will never hurt or betray you.
loved this peace....
you take control of the situation even when you should be shurttered to pieces!!