Ocean Delight

The sight of you

So blue

The sound of you

So gentle yet demanding

The smell of you 

Salty

I long to be 

Where you are

I long for you to be

Apart of me

From the morning until the night

I set you in my sight

Ocean you are my delight

Reviews

[Aehr]

Really nice, an ode to the ocean. I love water and the ocean, so this poem was one I really liked. Plus, I think there's a typo in the fourth line from down. I guess it should be 'A part of me' instead of 'Apart of me'? I really enjoyed it. a nice write.