Love, My Tragedy

There is a story to tell

Of my heaven and hell

Once not so long ago 

Scars buried me below

Demons played upon my fears

Blood, sweat, and the tears 

Took a hold of me

Blinded I could not see

Love, My tragedy 

Reviews

[Aehr]

the rhyme scheme was really nice. I like the flow of the poem. An emotional read, thanks for sharing.

[♥ Kinnixk]

Beautiful. I like the first stanza and the third the best :D

[Mad Hatter]

beautiful! :) flowed so nicely and i loved the rhyming!

[Layla J Omorose]

I like this poem and the rhyming. Good work in such a few short lines you told a story that could be told in a full length book. Good job

[Owlgirl]

Wow, that's a thought provoking, well written and worded, short and to the point, amazing poem! Great flow and awesome rhyme scheme, and is an interesting take on love. Love it!

[MOON]

love the flow and thought provoking take on love.