Silent Freak

Speak, speak, speak...

Oh how they wonder is she weak

A silent freak

The clothes she wears

Brings expensive nightmares

Black lipstick painted on her lips

Vampire nails on her bloody fingertips

Meaningless words she does not speak

They point, call her the freak

Her eyes are in such disguise

Tears she never cries

A freak she chooses to be

She speaks silently

Reviews

[KeeD]

This is so modern I love it.. Hiding behind her shadow, i'm afraid the world shall never know.. who she really is. I'm inspired by this piece, great write.

[Sami Khalil]

From what I'm getting in this write is that silence is not weakness...Bravo

[Rob Santana]

What a freaky piece. I love it!!!!

[Danielle]

Thank you

[Enid Blake]

Never judge a book by it's cover ;)

[Danielle]

Exactly...

[Pax]

humans are judgemental in nature, they speak whatever they want to, not minding the hurtful words the burried deep with a soul of an individual... sometimes i think who cares what they think, but deep down it hurts right... the thing is... silent is the best option but if its too much then its time to stand up to your beliefs...

A well expressed poem with nice rhyme...

[Dr. Wood ?]

great finish to this...We are always too quick in our judgement Appearences ARE deceptive...I know...I was a sixties rebel

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

many speak silently without ever saying a word. Their dress, their mannerisms, the look on their face or in their eyes, speaks volumes. Well done.

[L0v3craft]

This whole poem reminds me of when I was sixteen I had a reoccurring nightmare about this 19-year-old witch who would drag my soul to the demon world and haunt me with this apathetic stare and would never say a word as she summoned demons and monsters to terrorize me. There were other nightmares of her tricking me into thinking she was helping me out of the demon world but later I'd come to realize she had trapped me there and was only luring me in deeper and then offer me as a sacrifice to her pagan God...that b***h, lol.
God, I hated those nights--thanks for making me have flashbacks xD lol jk!

This was really creepy, love the descriptions on the freak! I think this poem could be expanded on more though, maybe more detail on how she feels towards those that judge her...maybe she's misunderstood because of her appearance? Just a suggestion.

Keep up the good work!
;]

~Angel