Our World

This poem is about how the world will one day just stop, nothing will happen again because of all the conflict.

The world turned grey today,
Everthing lost their color,
Nothing but the shade.

The world turned silent today,
Nothing can be heard,

Nothing but lips moving.
The world has stopped moving today,
Its all to the same,
Like photos in a picture frame.
There's no human interaction today,
The world is now dull,
People doing nothing,

Spite of it all.
There is no emotion today
Just sitting,

No repenting,
Just slagging,

Nothing nothing nothing.
The world turned grey yesterday,
And still everythings the same,
Never changing. Just staying.
 

Reviews

[Cats Eye]

Its a very interseting write, it is cunning way to put the world ending someday, great writed i enjoyed reading it

[Rosary]

I think it drags on a bit in my opinion but it doesnt lack a good writer behind it so my suggestion is just make it flow a little more and grab the readers atttention a little more