New Life.

 

A boxy room in antique shades,

Greets my anxious gaze,

Warmed by the beaming smile of an unknown figure,

A sense of misfitted fortune,

Fills this tiny structure,

A feeling likely to remain?
Primary,

Secondary,

Again and again,

I will overcome,

All it takes it a backbone,

For now small,

Yet stronger than stone

Reviews

[Ally Baker]

this IS incredible, you have great diction. ur a great writer, keep on writing!

[Lady Lazarus.]

this is frankly incredible......
your way with words in this is masterful.
beautiful,full of suspense and brlliant style!

[Niall H]

I was confused to the meaning of this originally, but now I understand.
It's interesting.
In a sense, I see where you're coming from with, "Yet stronger than stone" but shouldn't he/she be delicate rather than anything?

Either way, enjoyable with a really good start, especially the first two lines. Interesting.