DO LET ME GO

feeling of lost humanity

The scream that pierces through my ears.

The blood that i smell across those steer.

The innocence shattered on the floor.

Do let me go !

The overshadowed avarice.

The engulfed mercy.

The torn apart humanity.

Do let me go !

pain that leads to never ending vain,

rain that never quenches that stain

and irresistible sane

Do let me go !

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Innocence being ripped to shreds. Gullibility and vulnerability being murdered. I can surely feel the blood and gore. Well expressed and written

[Sreenath]

iam glad that you could relate mam thank you so much :)

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome, Sreenath. Keep writing. Pen On! :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Extremely well written and a way too personifying. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Sreenath]

thank you so much :)

[Saddam]

pain that leads to never ending vain,
rain that never quenches that stain
and irresistible sane
Do let me go !


Beautiful crafting and drawing the whole idea.
Like its play.

[Sreenath]

thank you :)

[~]

Whew.. what a plea! I can almost hear the scream and feel the shadows.. powerful!

[Sreenath]

thank you so much mam glad that you had time to stop by and review :)

[Leslie Philibert]

This is very dramatic, well written.

[Sreenath]

thank u sir

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem. It seem life had been devalued. I believe it is not too late. The common people must demand change and accept good and righteous only. If we don't Humanity will be a fairytale taught to children. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sreenath]

thank you so much for your kind review sir

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.