No More

A Poem by Shreyas Tripathy

A one-liner written for a contest !!!

Small little pieces of my heart

Strewn across the floor

More like a shattered mirror

Which no one wants anymore...

© 2012 Shreyas Tripathy

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rnuff

This is awesome, I really enjoyed this write, deep

Posted 13 Years Ago

Marie

Very good simile...shattered heart, shattered mirror....

Why do you use "small" and "little" together. Isn't one of these words redundant?

Posted 13 Years Ago

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13 Years Ago

I didn't realize that you had to use just 20 words.

13 Years Ago

I would like to enter that contest; how do I find it?

13 Years Ago

Its name is One sentence WOWZERS!

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Added on October 18, 2012
Last Updated on October 18, 2012

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Shreyas Tripathy

Jaipur, India

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I am Shreyas Tripathy, a student who is pursuing engineering in the discipline, Computer Science Engineering. I have always had a creative side in me. Its just that i never had a platform or the.. more..