Haiku #1

Haiku #1

A Poem by Connor

drop everything now
hear the wind sing so sweetly
raindrops, my shelter

© 2010 Connor


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another excellent haiku:)

Posted 15 Years Ago
You did a great job on the 5/7/5/. On the second line, did you mean sings..? I'm not understanding the concept of the entire context, perhaps you can enlighten it with a title to add to the scene you are painting. Overall you are on the right path, I am looking forward to reading more of your work...Raul

Posted 15 Years Ago

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i'm a journalism student attending northeastern university. my dorm bookshelf currently holds big sur by jack kerouac, the stranger by albert camus and junky by william burroughs. my favorite music ar.. more..