It's prom's night

It's prom's night

A Poem by shruthi
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The most important part of a teenager.. The prom... All our blood en thrilled with excitement over our costume and our partner... The music,ball room dance,the prom king and queen

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Atlas arrived the blissful evening
where no youth would be mourning
guys in trail-blazing tuxedos
Inside the pocket's with romantic rose

Girl's in party wear
eagerly awaiting her pair
messaging each other "it's prom's night"
excited to visit their site

the eyes search for their person
she is all set in her frock being crimson
it all brings up each other's passion
he manages to satisfy his women

The lights go dim
Breeze blows fast
Your hands on her hip 
Her's on your shoulder

weather turning cold
in the mellifluous music we tend to kiss
He has the maiden's heart inside her
without you it's life he will miss

Thus start's the beautiful love
IT's above the sky..
Far than the the seas..
Deep than the oceans..
Brighter than the sun..
Softer than the wind..
Harmonious than the world..

© 2014 shruthi


Author's Note

shruthi
I would appreciate the reviewers by suggesting me ideas and correcting my errors...!!!

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correcting errors.. well i am bad at it.. so cant help.. but i liked your thought.. the whole is well described.. your moments are well captured in your words and its all a beautiful moment.. unfortunately in Delhi we never had a prom's night.. so missed all the excitement..:)

Raj

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shruthi

11 Years Ago

Raj thanks a lot for the encouraging words and you precious times u've spent for poems i am damn hap.. read more
raj24

11 Years Ago

my friend is in some medical college in Bangalore.. they do have prom nights there... :).. they say .. read more
shruthi

11 Years Ago

oh well.... that's college :D



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correcting errors.. well i am bad at it.. so cant help.. but i liked your thought.. the whole is well described.. your moments are well captured in your words and its all a beautiful moment.. unfortunately in Delhi we never had a prom's night.. so missed all the excitement..:)

Raj

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shruthi

11 Years Ago

Raj thanks a lot for the encouraging words and you precious times u've spent for poems i am damn hap.. read more
raj24

11 Years Ago

my friend is in some medical college in Bangalore.. they do have prom nights there... :).. they say .. read more
shruthi

11 Years Ago

oh well.... that's college :D

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shruthi
shruthi

bangalore, India



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