The grass and the dew

My love for you is like the dew on the grass
I stay on u and rest wid u
Wake up wid u evryday
Dawn to dusk on u I stay...!!!

The sun shine on me...!!!
My skin is close to yours
makes me look bright...!!!
Its on you i exhibit...my light

Poet's and Writer's admire us together
Lots of love,it helps us gathr
I breathe in u.... I shine wid u
It's love between the grass and the dew.!!!

Even when i drp and fall
Your roots absorb me and am safe..
I wanna remain bein a dew...
as i get to live wid u...!!!!

If u've never existed
i wouldnt have too...!!!
Am happy u did 
as I have u...!!!

Always inside your arms
A place I've wanted to be
Atmosphere around us i calm and serene...
Dew in white... grass in green...!!!
all while together they've been

Reviews

[Mayank]

Avoid using shortcut english while updating poetry, you have chose the good theme of grass and dew, the feeling is good, keep on writing and work on metahphors.

[Shekinah2015]

Some spelling errors, but great otherwise. I think you should continue it by adding more metaphors. "My love for you is like the dew on the grass." Continue it. "My love for you is like....." what? Think up more metaphors. I think it will be even better that way. Wonderful, beautiful poem, though. Keep writing!