Me

Me...

   surviving the tides of solitude...

   swimming in the seas of isolation...

   searching evermore for the sands of time,

     to cleave a path cut with stones emanating warmth, 

     that will melt my skin, dissolve my heart...

  and it is there where my soul shall at last

                                           rest in peace...

Reviews

[Gray Witch]

Love this but hope you aren't feeling isolated because you're here with is in mind, and soul...

[being me]

here am comfortable...over here you are able to feel my pain, taste my joy, above all be with me by means of the written word..peace...

[Jack...]

Extremely melodic is this piece and though its underlying meaning may not be of glisten, this shines to me. Nice write.

[amy p]

Wow! Great imagery! I like it.

[The Nude Writer]

Wow.. few words used, but a lot of emotion and feeling. Fantastic work :)

[Jemmima]

An exellent read, Very unique.

[rnuff]

deep pondering write, enjoyed

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Nithin Purple]

Thought provoking and exquisitely beautiful!!!