Ruins

"Every end is a new Beginning"

To the Earthquake Victims of 25 April 2015 in Nepal

If it's the end of a rule

or ruins in War

for every new beginning

the old kingdom has to fall

sh va

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Zoya]

Ah, this seems kingly! Wise words expressed in a beautiful way...This dates back to 2015...I'm a 'bit' late...The tremors were felt in our city too...I guess that was the first time i experienced an earthquake...thankfully, no one was hurt. A great dedication to the victims. Good job!

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks for your kind review!

[Zoya]

No problem

[prajakta]

Everything said in four lines.great work!!

[Nightfeather]

This is the truth of truths. It is the way we humans live. One cannot save everyone for one must be sacrificed. I like the way that your poem is so short, but the message is so big.

Good job :D

[Divya]

Very beautiful lines. Awesome

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for ur review

[Gee]

Very profound,well done...........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

out of the ruins will rise a new, stronger nation...

old kingdom out, new kingdom in.

[Ana B.]

A shaking truth and a profound realization....maybe we're already the ashes of a civilization....deep wite.

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for your review

[Susana Grace]

This is definitely interesting, speaking about the silver lining in a subtle way !

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks Susana for your Review

[B]

Extremely creative in a pious way
I love the cause and your urge to write for it

Very righteous
A call out for hope
That what disappears must have held bad blood to be replaced with something way better
Amazing

[Deepak Belbase]

I'm agree with you. Bad Blood should be replaced with something better. But whether it is war or disaster they also take many innocent life with them. Thanks for your Review My Friend :-)

[Fallen king]

These are very strong words my friend. Keep it up :)

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks for Review my Friend!