I'm Time

"I'll never Come Back, cause I'm not a Chance For You"

I am not a chance, that you can redeem me

I’m not a rose, that you can see me again

I’m a time, that’ll slip from your hand

If you won’t worth me, I’ll leave you out in pain

I’m a time, good or bad, awful or beautiful, I’m all yours...

But I’ll never come back...

sh va

Author's Note

This is what I think of I am. I tried hard to be same, but as time passed I found my self changing with time to never bacame the same I was. All Comments are welcome

Reviews

[¿]

I guess if you're portraying yourself as time then you'll have a boomerang period in life also....boomerang for someone to pay you back or may you payback to someone....
As I've heard time spares none!
Great in short...!

[revalatia]

Great job. Obviously...but you know.. That ending grips me to the core..
'But I'll never come back..." .... .
We live our lives as time just continues,
and it's up to us how it's spent.
.short. Loaded with truth. Thanks for sharing dude!

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks for your time ;-)

[Tamika Finley]

Simple, holding such truth.. Amazing

[Shivai]

Really wonderful, I wonder if thats what time actually thinks of itself.
I loved it.

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks 4 review

[Shea McWilliams]

I really liked this. Traditionally, awful and beautiful are spelled with one L at the end, though. But this is great, it has a great message and it is worded perfectly. Wonderful job. Keep writing!

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for your review

[Zoey Ree]

This is a must read for everyone! You brought to life the lesson in relationships that many do not understand until it is too late. That your time and effort is precious and valuable and if not treated right, it will be gone. Great piece!

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks for your valuable comment