Friend

A Friend always gives you reason to be in this world.

To Sarpreet Singh Sunny

I was alone, sitting, viewing the Sunset

and realize I need to call him

I was about to call him

But he called me instead, saying

“How’re you, my friend?

What’s wrong with you?

Why didn’t you call me?

Do you think you’re an isolated Island?

Don’t be mad at you my friend

Cause I’m still here to mad at you,

you can’t get rid of me so easily,

cause I’m always there for you… “

sh va

Author's Note

I'm still surprise, cause it seems like a miracle whenever he call me when i need him. Thanks Sarpreet to be with me whenever I need you.

Reviews

[Arooj Purra]

A friend is one who is always with u ..no matter what is happening ...he always corrects u ...helps u ..understands u ....

ur poem absolutely expresses these feelings..

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks for reading and your constructive review! I hope someday he will succeed to correct me...

[Kenna Marie]

The simplicity of hearing a reassured remark and question- how refreshing. I didn't want to leave this page, it hit homes too well.
Well done.

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for the review

[B]

What a wonderful person
and what a meaningful call

not all calls are this close to the heart
i guess this person really knows how to connect with you

and what a bliss that may be

beautiful

[Deepak Belbase]

Their is always someone who make this call to you... method could be different but he does the same

[B]

Yes and once it ends
you are jumping around
and singing
and just fall and trip lol
that this person thought you are worth a call
oh that is more worthy than all the luxuries of the world

[Deepak Belbase]

because it's heal, same-thing a art do for you

[B]

yes yes yes

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

A friend is a person who can see your tears in rain.
A sweet ode. And very expressed emotions.
Great write!

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks Jyoti :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Sarpreet Singh "Sunny"]

wow deepak.... I like it.... Start a new journey..... With new passion...

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for motivation :)