You...

On the canvas of life

With divine colors, luminous hues

Many figures he drew 

None were as beautiful till

In his desire to create something new

He etched a picture of you...

Reviews

[BriAnna Wyble]

this is so beautiful, and is held deeply with rich emotion ...i love this!

[arbitrary jane]

do you write prose also? i think your imagery would lend itself well to other genres as well.

[Katannaism]

Gorgeous-Short, but full of expressive words that just made it larger than life. Enjoyed this small piece very much.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Beautiful, a painted picture within words.

[Sukriti Suki]

very very beautiful....amazing!

[Emily B]

oh, wow!

[An owl on the moon]

There is a joyous, lifting feel to your words.. they paint images of the world.. and that moment when the best was saved for last... Beautiful words...

[imawriter]

very niiiiice!

[Rossen]

less is more, this time.
Beautifully etched..



Rossen