Desolation

With his own rules,

Satan rules...

With the followed rules,

the good is poised to lose.

Because philosophized are they,

Hence dabble between the values,

of hope...

of despair...

And so are they destined to lose,

And yet again,

Maybe forever,

Satan rules,

with his own rules.

Author's Note

Wrote about the feelings of a good person,who despite of being good to everyone gets all the bad things in return....

Reviews

[sushi]

Awesome....

[Siddhartha]

Is filled with sadness and despair...But tell you what...the good has always and shall always prevail...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

It is so sad how people who is good to others gets dumped on! you expressed it so well in your poem, great job!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Scary poem, sends shivers like ice my friend.

[cfix]

Very well said.

[typingaway]

This sent a shiver down my back :P
amazing write!(:

[HopelesslyDevoted]

scary stuff dude!