FRIENDS

about what are friends

friends are jewels,

of childhood days.

friends are those

with whom we play.

friends are sweet ,

friends are nice.

some are also,

somehow alike.

all fakes are there,

in time of pride.

but some are also there,

when we need them a wide.

friends like this ,

are actually the friends.

and we should always ,

care for them.

Reviews

[Anshuman Aryav]

Wow.. amazing...and I enjoyed this piece..
Keep writing..
Keep sharing..

[Akki]

Awesome poet on Friends. I remind my all friends those are worthy to me & so many contributions of them into my life to be what we are now. you refresh my memories. Thank you! :))))

[siddhi]

THANKYOU AKKI IT WORTH A LOT TOUCHING SOMEONES HEART THROUGH PEOTRY IS THE MAIN MOTIVE BEHIND WRITING PEOMS

[Akki]

hmm.. I have no any sense of poet but after reading your and some others poet of friends inspires me to written a poet on something which always on my mind. But I didn't dare to write a poet for the only purpose I never wrote ever poet but Now, I think I have to written poet too.
Thanks!

[siddhi]

thanks to you
if you want any help contact me

[Akki]

Sure, I do!
Thank you, siddhi you are so sweet!
: )

[Tami]

Really liked it! You made it flow really well! Deserves all the points. :)

[siddhi]

thankyou tami

your frnd
siddhi

[siddhi]

to every one please give true review
i want them so that i can add more beatiful writtings
this is a humble request

[indian beauty]

The repetition helps it to flow well and it was an enjoyable read

[indian beauty]

This is definitely a 100 point poem, I felt all warm and wishful inside reading it. You've written an AMAZING piece.

[Tej K]

Hello Siddhi. Very nice poem here. The repetition helps it to flow well and it was an enjoyable read. Only one suggestion. I think the last line should read "care for them" to be grammatically correct.
Keep up the good work. :)

[siddhi]

Thankyou for your suggestion.

[Melliflower]

I think this is a beautiful piece of writing to begin pursuing your passion with! I look forward to seeing what new writing you have in store for us int he future. x

[siddhi]

thanks i will post new one soon