river

river is inspiring

river never stops, 

it just rocks. 

sometime cool as snow, 

sometime hot as magma.

when it is cool, 

people think it is a pool. 

when it is hot,

it wash out all.

but river never stops it,

just keep on moving.

no matter what ,

all she is controlling.

Author's Note

i know it is short but it is good please read it .

Reviews

[Anshuman Aryav]

Wow...Short but enough for attracting readers...and for connecting with readers..
The way you have described few qualities of river is amazing..
But I must say...it can be presented more beautifully...
All the best..
Keep writing..
Keep sharing..

[siddhi]

to every one please give true review
i want them so that i can add more beatiful writtings
this is a humble request

[indian beauty]

This is definitely a 100 point poem, I felt all warm and wishful inside reading it. You've written an AMAZING piece.

[Knight Writer]

small and beautiful... quality matters ...not the quantity

[siddhi]

i know that's why i wrote this
thanks for reading and reviewing

[zunie frost]

short but really nice piece of work......

[siddhi]

thankyou for reading and rewiewing

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!

[Archana]

Nice work siddhi..........

[siddhi]

thanks for reading and reviewing