THE ANGEL OF SAD ONES

I WAS ALONE 

THERE IN THE

CORNER

OF DARKNESS

SORROW RODE

UPON ME

FOR SADNESS

DEEP DOWN IN THE SAD LAND

ONES CAME

A ANGEL

OF SAD ONES

HOLD MY HAND 

TOOK ME OUT

OF THAT CORNER

IN WHICH 

I WAS FOUND

NOW IN LIGHT

BUT STILL IN SIGHT WAS THAT

SAD LAND FAR OUT

Reviews

[Greg Agee]

Good direction , nice poem, the situation it represents is important today. You've done a good job with the flow as well. I dig it

[siddhi]

thankyou greg i am a teenager very sensitive usally faces this kind of situations that is the reason behind this flow

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siddhi

[Riddhi]

Really nice poem..Keep it up...Thanks for sharing...

[siddhi]

tahnkyou riddhi so so much for all the review i will also reviwew your works as soon as get timeread moretahnkyou riddhi so so much for all the review i will also reviwew your works as soon as get time

your frnd
siddhi

[Akki]

I hope angel was beautiful If she then introduces me to her...
Friend k liye itna bhi nahi ker sakti kya... hahhaha lol zzzz
Joke apart but, your this one is a very smooth and nice....
: )

Your friend,
Akki.

[siddhi]

thankyou mujhe pata tha ki woh line was a joke don't faer about that

your frnd
siddhi

[Akki]

How clever you are ????
Thanks!

Your friend,
Akki.

[siddhi]

my pleasure mr.::::::::::::)

[Akki]

hahaha... don't angree... it was a joke...

[siddhi]

yup
i'm going offline bye bye

[Akki]

abhi na jao chod k hume ye nagma gau kya ab rote hue....
Don't bye.... I feel alone here without you

[Bethsinitaly]

Love this one nice and dark but with a nice dose of tremulous hope at the end - always the perfect mix :)

[siddhi]

thankyou very much
i actually wrote it just like writing
any other one but when it was fully written
i found it different
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[siddhi]

to every one please give true review
i want them so that i can add more beatiful writtings
this is a humble request

[indian beauty]

This is definitely a 100 point poem, I felt all warm and wishful inside reading it. You've written an AMAZING piece.