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I'd really like some help on titling this piece, I have no idea what to name it haha XD

Kiss me roughly, tenderly, it doesn’t matter

I just want your lips on mine

Don’t worry about when I have to go, have to leave your side

I just want to lose track of time

 

Touch me lustfully, softly, I don’t care

I just want my hand in yours

Don’t worry about what others will think, what they’ll say

I just don’t care about that s**t anymore

 

Tease me heavily, playfully, the night is young

I just want to be with you

Don’t worry about me being with anyone else, I won’t

I just want you to be the one I run to

 

Want me now, when I’m gone, like I’m the oxygen in your lungs

I just want to be what you desire

Don’t worry about hurting me, destroying me

I just want to burn in your heart’s raging fire

 

Love me today, tomorrow, and everyday after

I just want us to never say goodbye

Don’t worry about me falling out of love with you, it won’t happen

I just don’t want this to be a lie

Reviews

[LOfCharlemagne]

Seeing how this poem is about romance, I would suggest something involving love. Since it appears that a loved person is leaving, I would suggest something along the lines of "Love Departed" or "Time to Say Goodbye". On the content, its a really nice poem that stresses the sad event of a love one leaving. It is sad when that happens, and you do a great job of portraying that