At The End Of The Day

I hate how much I fear losing you

How just thinking about it breaks my heart

Even though I can’t see any type of future with you

I go insane when we’re apart

 

I hate how my faith has been shattered

Crushed by my own thoughts of despair

I can’t stay alone any longer

This loneliness is colder then any winter air

 

 I hate how my trust for you is broken

I can’t let go of the past

After all these empty promises

I can’t see how we’re ever going to last

 

I hate how much I lust your touch when you’re gone

How your seductive voice poisons my ear

I’m addicted to the essence of you

I want these feeling to disappear

 

I hate how much loving you hurts

But I’m not strong enough to walk away

No matter how much damage you’ve done

My heart is still yours at the end of the day

Reviews

[melissa's heart]

Oh this is heart renching, but I understand that kind of lonliness, I think every one has experienced this before they find the right one. Remember that you get what you settle for, and you deserve the best, so don't settle for less. You have us your friends to talk to to get you through the lonely days. I love this poem.

[Panda]

I agree with you 100% :) I'm glad I have people I can turn to and talk to because I honestly have no idea what I would do without them

[melissa's heart]

well I'm not much, but you have my friendhip whenever you need it.

[Panda]

:) I'm glad ^^ And your friendship does mean a lot

[melissa's heart]

YOURS TOO

[R.O.M.E.T.S.I.]

Don't we all know this feeling. What is it about the human heart that refuses to let go when it's been shattered? Good poem, you capture it well.

[Panda]

~Smiles~ Thank you very much. I'm glad that other people can relate to this. Well maybe not glad but...You know what I mean XD

[Pax]

raw emotional poem. I like it. good job

[Panda]

Arigato ^_^

[mayank kashyap]

Captures the feeling of a troubled relationship in a perfect way

[Panda]

Thank yo for the review ^_^ It really does mean a lot to me :)