Alone

I feel like you are behind me

I can feel you gripping me

the hatred in your eyes

every hit I took from you only pushed me closer to the edge

and now I am barely hanging on

am I supposed to feel like this

what did I do to make you hate me so much

you fooled me once

I thought you loved me

but it was the wrong kind of love

and now I am completely broken

I wish you would leave me alone

but I realize that will never happen

you are worse then a parasite

sucking the life right out of me

you infect my dreams

and hold my mind hostage when I am awake

I try to cut you out

but you still remain

and I am left with one thought

'you were supposed to be my hero'

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems english is my third language

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

I really like this, they way you've written it is quite powerful. Having said that it could be much better if you use punctuation.... It can make this even better if done correctly.... and I love the last line being in the inverted commas. It's got a good effect

[Leanne Conway]

Krásná báseň

[I Am Svetlana]

Love is a very difficult emotion to understand...a lot of people say they love you and they don't mean it, but you are fooled because of your emotions for them when they are real and theirs are fake. They fake their emotions with a smile on their face and once you find out they never loved you, you want to die, jump off a cliff, anything just to get away from them. Love makes people hate eachtoehr, love brings people together, love tears people apart...it's very destructive and a lot of people can't handle it so well...but this was a wonderful poem

[James Bonner]

I have trouble reading poems about a love lost. I seldom find something I enjoy. But, I enjoyed reading this. It sounds.. honest.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this is sad. I think this was very well written. I feel like this right now..
I don't think I can ever get that emotion out of my head...