Closed honest death.

I am only hurting those whom I love. I will now be forever quiet.

I am now forever quiet

striving no longer for mercy of the people,

people whom I was lucky to have even known.

I find no longer need for voice,

for words,

for sound.

I am now to be closed.

I have lied more than I wish to admit,

and have caused nothing more than grievences and heartache.

I am now to be honest.

I am now alive, soon to be dead within myself,

I am soon to be without a soal,

consumption from the belly within,

escape contained only within thine own brain.

I wish no longer,

speak no longer,

see no longer,

long no longer.

Find me here,

gone.

Author's Note

please tell me what you think?

Reviews

[Domenic Stewart]

Sad and made me feel rather down for a while. Powerful stuff, though the Metal i had been listening to probably didn't help my mood after reading this.

[Kayla P.]

It's dreadful & may even give some readers a little tear at the corner of their eye.

[Mackenzie Brooke]

I like this alot really good write!