Summer Thunder

A haiku in English to the latter rains of summer

The Drums of Summer

rumble over the parched lands,

bringing welcome rains.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderfully expressed Watercress. You have not only captured some superb imagery, I saw the flashes of lightning, the darkening skies and the rainfall cascading heavily on parched land, I also heard it. Really nice Haiku here. Very well done. All good wishes

Chris

[Remanence]

Thank you Chris. Your reviews are wonderful. I just read and commented upon your poem "Interlude" and you relate to water like few others do. You have a wonderful connection with it!

[Chris Shaw]

That is really nice of you to say. I do have an affinity with water. Not just the ocean but rivers and lakes too. The ocean is not in close proximity but we have lakes and rivers close to us. Means I can still get a bit of a fix :)

[NotUsinganymore]

Vere interesting poem about the summer rain.

[Remanence]

Thank you JungLee, I am pleased that you have found it be worth commenting upon. I have read your work and you have extraordinary talent!

[NotUsinganymore]

Thank you for that compliment

[Relic]

A great haiku here. I enjoyed.

[Remanence]

Thank you Relic. I read your poem "The gypsy-like leaves" and it is wonderful!

[Relic]

Thanks. :)