It's Love When...

It's love when she waits for you to reply after she sends you something else with the fear that she'll annoy you,

It's love when every small emote you send her means a lot to her,

It's love when she wants you to give her a surprise as she gives you every now and then,

It's love when all she wants from you is a hug when she's down,

It's love when even though you don't like her, she'll keep up hopes for you to come forth and tell her that you love her,

It's love when she cries because you're avoiding her when she needs you the most,

It's love when all her expectations are high because she knows you wouldn't hurt her purposely,

It's love when she lies to you that she's over you and types "I love you" and backspaces it because she's too scared of saying it to your face,

Because maybe losing you you is her biggest fear and her first step to her grave,

It's love when she'll wait for you as much as she can with her love increasing everyday for you.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Oh young Love, Blind love, Carefree, High school love, Young crushes. Nice work. not a place I want to go back to again but nice to remises. Thank you for sharing. Blessings

P.S. Thank you for the inspiration.. blessings got a new poem to write and post. just about everything inspires me it is God and the writes and everything around us family experiences love our children nieces nephews mom's and dad's and grandpa's and grandma's brother's and sister's and friends and music even the trees and the birds Gods creations. :))

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. I'm waiting for your next poem. I'm happy to be an inspiration for you. (:

[KittyVenus]

beautiful, i love the repitition!!!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you! Your name is so cute "KittyVenus" (: I love it.

[KittyVenus]

thanks! XD this is brilliant- im in lesson

[xDalliance]

It's love. It's love I'm feeling for this poem. Just straight to the heart. Amazing!

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha! Thank you Jharna. (:

[Frieda P]

Sounds like young, blind love, caught up in the relentless obsession of it all...backspacing is so timely. Good read Simran. :-)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Frieda. (;

[Frieda P]

That's the way to let it all hang out, my pleasure ;-)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful write. I like it, and it''s something that I can relate to. Brilliantly writen.

Kaze~ :-)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (:

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

All good. ;-)

[A. Amos]

I love the whole concept of blind love and you penned it very well my friend, looking forward to read more from you..

[Simran Kewlani]

Thanks a lot.

[Cid]

Now, why am feeling that this piece's written for me?? :/ OMG! How did you know, am so hot?? :/ ha!
Ha! (Kidding)
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Yeah, this poem's nice n a very emotional one either n yeah, he shouldn't put her on wait cus, angels're not made to do wait but to give their warmth with their hugs so that people could feel the real beauty of the life how beautiful is it. This poem's well written from your heart, your feelings, the pain, the love of him and everything you do love for is well penned into the words.

Keep penning!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Cid. I really appreciate this.