without ownership

it's a win-win situation, dear

'

Money ain't the key to everything
You can't unlock the treasure troves with a few printed notes
Embrace your senses to perceive them beautiful things around you.
Clearly,I don't need to buy your silence
I will never buy your indifference
I don't see a price tag on your personality.
Still, I have loved you
Just like I loved the sea waves breaking on rocks,
The sunset amidst the mountain cliff
And the serenity of a baby's sleep.
And, then you told me,you don't relate to love
I thought I would say something
Now, all I have to say is, you are not mine
And I don't need to own you to love you.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"And I don't need to own you to love you."
Very true words above. Love isn't ownership. It is sharing a life. Taking care of each other. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Namrata]

Thank you for the review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Fran Marie]

some of the most precious things in life clearly cannot be bought...when it comes to love
it's a two way street.... so the choice is yours to stay with or leave someone who does not
return those feelings...nicely penned piece

[Namrata]

I wish more people understood this.

[Effector Prime]

It has the lustre of a seasoned thinker of such a profound melancholy and graceful poetic skills, this poem.. Put together, the delivery is so amazing! Thanks for sharing :)

[Saddam]

A beautiful but brilliantly written poetry. I love it. So true so honest.

[Namrata]

Thanks a ton