Tailor Made

Poem about women.

As she weaves her fabric,

she seems capable.

She seems unbeaten,

she seems a warrior.

She seems independent,

she seems gay.

She seems machine,

she seems man.

As she weaves her fabric,

her seams are broken.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[papercut]

I really like this poem, I was worried as I read through it that it might be too choppy, but it worked well for what you were trying to portray. I could really feel the emotion of everything she was feeling and the weight of her emotions that were on her shoulders. you did really good with the flow of the poem and the way you ended it with a round- a-bout worked nicely. overall I really enjoyed your work keep up the good work.

[sirsaff]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!