Falling

Falling

a poem by sissybug

 

Crushed Crushed falling down

Farther and farther without a sound.

 

The depths of hell an unpleasant place

fire buring every face

 

look what you did to end up here

you hurt everyone who ever thought you dear

 

so stand up and raise your head

accept your punishment now that you are dead.

Author's Note

i dont even know why i wrote this.. :)

Reviews

[sissybug]

Thank you for the reviews! :) I really enjoy reading them. once again i havent been o here in AWHILE, but i am going to try and write more and share all that i write! thanks to everyone on here for the encouragment and critisicm!

[AndyJCash]

Nice little poem. Just a reminder that it doesn't hurt to be nice, but it does to be mean =]

[sissybug]

haha you never know, dependant upon the person you are and how you lived your life, if you enjoy evil or not, you may think it pleasant or completely dreadful.

[Shiningwolf]

Wow, this attacked my soul. I can feel the emotion wrapped in these words, but of course again

"The depths of hell an unpleasant place"

Why I wouldnt imagine they would be pleasant! lol!