A Brilliant Comet

Sometimes, a person can come into your life, change it forever...

Dormant...linear...predictable...
Only a flicker of flame remained...
Comfort in the familiar banality...
Gazing into the starry sky...all spoken for...
Extrinsically acting out the role...until...
Whispers of mystery streamed into my lonely soul...
Blue hues entranced...intellect piqued...
An elemental presence of a rare gravitational force summoned...
Long forgotten energy erupted like a dormant volcano...

Encompassing my thoughts..desires...dreams...
Unfamiliar urges permeate...invigorate...
Deep becomes my longing to intertwine...
Journey into eternity...embrace everlasting...
Boundless energy lights every fiber of my being...

A brilliant comet's trajectory directly to my heart...
Blessed, humbled, and grateful...
My one, true love.

Reviews

[katijori]

This, by, far, is the most beautiful ly written piece I've read of yours ... It emanates so much hope that is so often forgotten...

[RAOrourke]

Whispers of mystery streamed into my lonely soul
Encompassing my thoughts..desires...dreams...
Unfamiliar urges permeate...invigorate...
Deep becomes my longing to intertwine...
Journey into eternity...embrace everlasting...
Boundless energy lights every fiber of my being...loved the description and emotions of these words! Outstanding poem! Brought about vivid images and can feel the love behind the words. Wonderful!

[Steve L.]

Thank you for your awesome review!

[Lyn Anderson]

Romantic, intense, and well constructed.

[Steve L.]

I really appreciate your review!! Thank you.

[AprilRN1210]

I like the fragmented construction of this.. teasing with its descriptions, its imagery, its emotion.. the phrasing is exquisite and beautiful.. this is one of my new favorites of yours.. sometimes, people come into our lives and make an impact.. sometimes it is subtle and other times powerful and bright.. souls connect.. and it is a magical thing.. I think you expressed that wonderfully here.. awesome job Steve.. I really enjoyed this!.

[Steve L.]

Thank you so much April!! :) I absolutely agree that a select few can deeply affect our lives.

[TheCreatore]

This is quite insightful. It's powerful, and lovely. I wouldn't change much about it... do you think true love really lasts? Just curious;) Thanks so much for sharing!

[Steve L.]

Thank you for reviewing. And yes, if the love is powerful enough, it can last...however, that same love wil change over time, as all does...it will still be true love, but one that has been affected by life...