Illegal Activity

scanning the street for the red, white and blue

because now's no time to be a patriot

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

So short but sharp.
I like it :D

[Rachel DeHart]

All I can think of is my moms old photos of her Vietnam protesting.
And how now... it wouldn't be the same. Couldn't be.

This is amazing.
:}

[Lola]

Hm... interesting. Its shortness adds to the poem, actually. But if you read between the lines...
I like it. If you take the title with it, it certainly has one thinking. Nice job.