Under Your Influence

i sank so quickly

it was too easy

for me to get lost

 

to tell you the truth

 

i wanted to forget

but then

it was all i could do to remember

 

unrestrained interest 

dull elation

and the sobering shame

 

realizing that

what happens under your influence

is nothing more than a game

 

you were gone long before the feeling was

Reviews

[Rachel DeHart]

I agree with Stepanie I love the last line.

[Stephanie W.]

i really like the last line. its a powerful end to it.