I Can Never

i named your disinterest my enemy;

turns out it was fear

pinning me down,

tying me here,

keeping me quiet,

serving me beer. 

 

if i could grow time in a jar,

just know that i would.

i would wait for you,

wait until you understood.

but we're not forever.

someday we'll be s**t. 

that what i have for you

will be buried, and quick.

 

so inter your worries

because i can never.

 

Reviews

[Rachel DeHart]

I know this feeling all to well. And I love the way you capture it here.
I think my favorite parts have to be
[its a tough call mind you, cause I want to just copy and past the whole thing. :} ]
"if i could grow time in a jar,

just know that i would."
or maybe
"but we're not forever."

All in all, this is amazing.

[Stephanie W.]

"pinning me down,
tying me here,
keeping me quiet,
serving me beer. "

i like that.