partly cloudy

clouds stretch their selfish fingers 

across the untamed sky 

it's ours, they sneer 

you can't touch it 

but the wind is a fair judge 

and now their turn is over 

the sky is mine again 

to feast upon 

with gluttonous eyes.

Reviews

[Gee]

Short and oh so sweet. Really liked this

[puffz]

love.
why can't i just post "love." T.T
the imagery in this is... wonde(r)ful.
my review is still
love.

-edit for spelling xD

[Kitty Cat]

Jinkies. I'm honored. Thanks for reading!

[iamshadowine]

your style of writing is quite impressive! i really like it! this poem is a real good piece! keep writing :D

[Kitty Cat]

Thank you very much!