Vampyre

This is about a vampire stalking his prey.

He gazes into the city lights

Searching for someone who can sate his tastes

Delights..

Walking…

Talking…

Unaware of his silent stalking

A young woman

In Distress

Creeps trying to take off her dress

She struggles and flee's

Leaving her purse

Not knowing this is just the beginning of the worst

Frightened…

Alone..

She wanders

"Perfect"

The vampyre thinks as he draws closer

So close

He can hear her pulse

"Is somebody there?"

She asks, voice quivering in fear

"I gave you my money..Leave me alone."

Her cries muffled by terror and tears

"Are you lost?"

A voice questions from the unknown..

"No, leave me alone…"

She replies to the shadows

"Alright"

As he comes into sight

She stands there

And at first backs up in fright

Looks into his eyes

"Do I know you?"

"Define, "know"

He says slyly

As he gets closer to his prey

"Yes, I suppose you do.."

"….or will."

With that he grabs her

Like he expects, she puts up no fight

Just gazes at his hypnotic stare

Unaware that this will be her last night

As a human…

He bares his fangs and sinks them in near her collar bone

She gasps

A tear running down her cheek

Meekly she, at last, tries to pull away

To late she has already lost to much

He lets go of her and she tumbles to the cement

"Lament your life."

"And be rebourne"

He grins wickedly as he fades away into the night …

 

Author's Note

It's not my best...

Reviews

[Marie]

I thought it was nicely done. If this is you at your 'worst' (let me re-phrase - not your best) I can't wait to read your best. Thank you for sharing.

[S.v. Rincon]

I really like this. The rythum to the words is great and the piece flows well. Imagery is good, of couse, I love vampires, so I might be a bit bias. Great job though.