lost

the last word is in romanian

                                                      

                                                     lost

                      lost empty cold blood pain hurt lust

                these are the things that my life consists of 

          no one can save me i fall head first and fail with life 

 i faint coated in sweat on the floor waking up alone alone alone the word echoes in my head on its own alone, lost

                    pierdut

        

Author's Note

same as description

Reviews

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Many times I too have felt that pain
Tears filling hearts like rusted old rain
Cold and alone afraid to reach out

Written with soulful angst and grace...well done

[lovely-livia]

beautiful sis just beautiful!!

[OT]

it's like a fairy sat in your mouth - nice! so original - it ripples on my eyes!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I simply had to revisit this breathtaking ORIGINAL creative adjective filled gem! and leave a WOW!

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

Aahh, the repetition adds such strength and bone to this wonderous piece.

[gothicchica]

its romania not romany theres a slight diffrence look into it but thanks selene and i love culture thats why i know what that means

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

your poetich echoes down the well of soul~magikal dark fable~

pierdut~faded~ ROMANY!!! =)~ I speak minimal old world courtesy of grandmare~ =)~

[alexlessah]

good job, its very sad.

[gothicchica]

thanks solo2be

[solo2be]

Very well writtten.