Sunset

A poem about mortality.

To the west one is obliged
The final slivers
Rewarding the coming dawn

Reviews

[Sleiman Azizi]

This is a line I wrote as part of a Noh play I am working on.

I've tried to highlight the idea, on one hand, of change with this verse and the on the other, acceptance.

I hope it works.

[Chris]

I see my own thoughts reflecting back. The changes are palpable...

[Sleiman Azizi]

I've a strange feeling that poetry only works on the converted or the about-to-be-converted.

[Chris]

good meeting you.