slender

slender

A Story by slenderdemon
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Long long ago,there is a man who is tall and thin,his hand is 2m long.His face is nothing,he have a glorious feet which is so so long,everyone saw him is dead.Who is he? I want to explore.

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Long,long ago.A man in the dark dark forest gives us a fear even we are miles and miles away,he is very very tall,tall as 2 doors high.His hand is 2m long.His head is nothing,everyone trys to imagine what he look like.He's wearing a old suit.It should be 1967's fashion suit.     There is a man that wants to explore slender man's secret.Everyone in his family told him not to go to forest,but he did not mind.When he is in the forest,the sky is dark,he saw a paper said"FIND THE 7 PAGES.FAST!OR ELSE YOU WILL DIE!"He took a torch and a camera which is recording,he run as quick as he can,finding the another 7 pages.    When he is going for the last page,battery inside the camera is dead,he heard a strange sound in the forest and he is so freaking scared.But,he can't run out of his fate of death.

© 2015 slenderdemon


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slenderdemon
Hope you can give me some beautiful opinions,thank you.

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This story is simply full of excitement. It would be great if it had more, the ending is just not enough. But overall the sentence that says "But,he can't run out of his fate of death." sums it all. Beautiful writing, I'll be looking forward for your other writings, or if you added a chapter 2 perhaps. Great job, and just keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wonderful work...keep writing my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


HI!Anyone here please give me comments,if it is not good,you can still give me comments


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 4, 2015
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