Late Night Trip

Star blasts, light the sky

Embers hot, glowing dances

Smoke rises, dust settles

 

At the foot of the fire

Looking up

Psychedelic orchestra

A surreal midnight voyage

 

Not an ear to hear

No one there to share

A rollin’ stone I’ll remain

Tumblin’ without a care

Author's Note

Feel free to review. I respect and appreciate criticism, positive or negative.

Reviews

[allie_arrowz]

i really like this. i love the imagery especially in the first stanza.

[w]

I can say only that this is a wonderful piece. I am sure if I sat on it for quite sometime I could find a negative, but I don't want to.

[Laura Maidah]

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. BLOWS MY HEAD RIGHT OFF> OMGOMGOMGOMG.

[Rhea752]

vivid imagery. good vocabulary. LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!

great write!! :P

[Mazie Tackett]

i like it

[Celestial Witch Child]

Wonderful details and luscious imagery... Great piece.