I'm Just A-Ramblin'

My heart cracks a little

When I think of me and you

Yet, I’d rather let it crack

Than be broken into two

Reviews

[Celestial Witch Child]

I like it. I don't think this poem can be fully appreciated by the reader unless they have gone or are currently going through the situation you have written about. Then it really hits home. Simple, but beautiful in it's simplicity. A good write.

[N. Nellan]

I like it. The depth of it can't be perceived by the number of words used... it should be perceived by the words not used. I like it.

[Laura Maidah]

Last line is a cheesy Cyrus cry for help. The title? Is it the real title? The crack repetition is out of character for you. Me no like. Sorry. You're a talent though. maybe I'll like your next one a bit more.

[Rhea752]

awwwww it's all heartbreaking and said. nice job!!! :)

[Mazie Tackett]

nice its cool

[CH Archive]

awh, a sweet poem man. That is actually so catchy

[Amelie]

Lovely thoughts from a ramble. Ever thought of adding a few more stanzas?

[Jordan A. Wilson]

Not really just because most of the stuff I write comes to me in flashes and once the flash is over I'm done with the given piece. It's kinda weird but that's how I do it lol :)

[Amelie]

I've read it two more times prior this reply and I realized its better to end there. When I read it the first time, it felt like it has to be elaborated, but then I can't seem to think what you might've said more. Well you should be proud of your method. "Brevity is the soul of wit".

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

I'd have to agree..I don't always like a poem this short, but it's got the most power as is, I think.

[kayla]

Aww. How cute. I love this poem

[Jorge Martinez]

Great poem, you said it all.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nice man! With a few more stanzas it could be awesom! That's why I love when I ramble because good ideas always come! Keep it up