Let The Tears Fall

Where these poems come from, I couldn't tell you...because I have no idea.

All the sadness bottled up
Never to be seen
Never to be heard
Never to be known

I know you didn't try to hurt me
You tried not to cause me pain
You tried to soften the blow
But really, that just made it worse

The pain I went through every day
I kept away from everyone
How my skin was black and blue
Never occured to any of you

You never knew
how hard my life was
Nobody ever knew
And nobody ever will

So now that I am finally alone
And nobody can see me
Nobody can hear me
Nobody can know

I will gladly let
Just this one
And only time
These bottled up tears flow

Author's Note

Hey; I know this poem look really different than my other ones, but I'm on a 2 gen I pod touch at the moment, so uh...yeah. Anywho, please comment if you have anything to say, I love feed back so please review!! :D

Reviews

[Felecia]

Very nice work! Love it :)

[eeoopig]

Good work. A very sad piece, though one I could relate to at times - beautiful. The flow of this poem is great and I love it!

[Stargirl]

*WOW* just wow! I can sure relate to it. Very sad, but very well done c:

[Harley (arbiter)]

*mindblown* I've felt this and obviously can relate. Nice job girl

[MOON]

Poignant write flows.

[deepblue04]

Awwwh!!! This is so sad, I sympathize for this person... It's pretty

[w]

This flowed really well and I am a stickler for flow and consistency. The only issue I have is the last stanza seems to not fit with the rest of the piece. I don't mean content wise, I mean flow. Your lines end a minor thought and in the last stanza they don't which is not a bad thing if you do it right, but I feel (my opinion) that it is formatted inconsistently from the rest of the piece. You may have been going for that, but I do not know and for me it does not work, but I am just one man.

[Aehr]

Many people can relate to this one. But very well done... I love the flow and your emotions can be felt by the reader.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I know what it's like. Love it! Keep writing :)

[darkness*star1985]

i have been here myself some times i have to lock up my tears and ignore how i feel... good word flow.... Brillent but sad write..