STOP!!!!

being friends with two people that hate each other with a passion sucks.

I just want it to stop
it hurts me so much
to see you two like this

I don't know what to do
when will you just stop?

everyday you are
at each others throats
bickering and bickering and
BICKERING!

enough with the comments
jokes and taunts
just stop it!

I am supposed to be
your friend
and you are supposed to be
 mine
so act like it!

If we really are friends
please don't keep trying
 to kill each other
at least around me.

so please all I ask of you
is to not fight
I hate to see you
 two like this

and when everyone else
 picks sides
It tears me to pieces

so stop fighting
stop being so cruel
just do one thing...
STOP IT!!!

Author's Note

well? what do you think? please review!

Reviews

[Aehr]

well done.. i can relate to this COMPLETELY!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah I should have read this about a month ago. If it was here then. I can relate and I hated the guy and it mustve really hurt my friend when I punched the dck in the nose. I can feel the emotion in the situation from the poem. Good write

[Rasputin]

Hammertime.

[MusicLover]

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i can not spell to save my life

[Chloe]

Two words: FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!!

[MOON]

Lovely write , stuck between warring parties and futile bickering.

[Reaper]

wonderful poem

[MandaBear]

I loved this in fact. Thanks for sharing.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Being stuck in the middle is never easy. Great write.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. I agree with it. They are supposed to be your friends then they wouldn't ask you to choose sides and they would stop bickering. I loved this in fact. Thanks for sharing.