I Mustn't Cry

Even though you left me, I will stay strong!

You are gone
and I am
alone again.

I thought that
we had something
called love.

Maybe we did
or I just
imagined it.

But that doesn't
matter at all
right now.

I don't know
if you feel
this pain.

But I do
know that I
feel the hurt

It is so
agonizingly and
horrifyingly painful.

I could just
scream
or possibly cry.

No, I can't let
 my pain show
I mustn't cry!

No matter
 how much
I want to...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Virtuosa X]

I love this. And I can relate to every word with every fiber of my being. There's always someone leaving & you're always far behind, wondering what went wrong or what happened to you when it seems like they never cared.

Beautiful!
Nice Job!

[MandaBear]

awesome loved the emotion. and sometimes you need to cry even if you dont want to. great job

[Aehr]

i love the emotion. The message is nice. 'You left me, bu I will stay strong.' Honestly, as a whole - very well written. Many people can relate to this, and those who can, well.. they get a good message...

[Amanda]

Like it!

[hopelessromantic]

i love it love is so painful

[Alex Vidmar]

Well done.

[luna11]

great poem. I like it :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well again I can relate. And its ok to cry sometimes. My last hurt I only shedded one tear for. I couldn't do anymore that that. You should read the poem about it. Single tear by meee! Lol but I liked the write. It describes the situation really good good job

[Abigail]

I love how emotional this poem is! It is very well written and I am sure most people can relate to the topic. However some of your words could be substituted for "better" ones but hey it is just an opinion. Once again great poem loved it!

[Arwen Evenstar]

I love it. u express it yet u hold back not letting the person really know just how hurt u r yet u do. if that makes any sense. its really good i loved reading the emotion and being able to relate to it.